October 17, 2026
Dear [Hiring manager's name],
At Northshore Wellness Partners I coach a caseload of 45 clients through structured behavior-change programs, mostly around weight, blood pressure, and diabetes-prevention goals set with their physicians. I'm applying for the Health Coach role at [Company name] because I want to keep working somewhere that measures a program by client outcomes, not just session counts.
Across my last 12-month cohort of 60 clients, 68% hit their primary goal, whether that was a blood pressure range, a weight target, or a fasting glucose number, and average program completion held at 81% against a national benchmark closer to 50%. I also built a four-week onboarding track that cut early dropout by nearly half.
I hold a National Board Certified Health and Wellness Coach credential, run motivational-interviewing-based sessions, and coordinate directly with clients' physicians and care teams when a goal needs a clinical adjustment. I track every session in our care platform so progress is visible to the whole care team, and I flag any client trending off-track within a week rather than waiting for a monthly review.
I'd welcome the chance to talk with you about [Company name]'s coaching model and how my completion and outcome numbers could fit it. Thank you for your consideration.
Thank you,
Casey Chen